Thanks for the comments! Dimitri! And you got one to. ;)

the flow is perfect.... thx

Great Song, I like it very much

this sounds super sheldon77 you have a new follower like your style

I’m screaming in a crowded room, But no one turns, no one moves. I’m spilling my soul into the air, But the silence tells me no one cares. The weight is crushing, but they look away, Like I’m invisible, fading away. No one cares, I’m just a shadow here, A whisper lost that no one will hear. Falling deeper, but no one sees, Caught in the dark of my own disease. ) I wear a smile like a paper mask, Hiding the pain they never ask. I build my walls, brick by brick, While the cracks inside grow deep and thick. The words I speak are drowned by the noise, An empty echo, a broken voice. No one cares, I’m just a shadow here, A whisper lost that no one will hear. Falling deeper, but no one sees, Caught in the dark of my own disease. Maybe it’s me, the fault’s in my skin, A battle I lose, a war within. But if someone reached, would I even know? Or am I too far, too far below? No one cares, I’m just a shadow here, A whisper lost that no one will hear. Falling deeper, but no one sees, Caught in the dark of my own disease.