The elements that you have used for this track are not of very great quality unfortunately. It sounds very distorted and all over the place. So it wasnt my cup of tea when it comes to quality. Still i noticed what you tried to do here. And thats was a very nice and good idea indeed. To bad the quality is really bad. Dont shoot the messenger. But its my take on this track. So if i were you i would redo this song completely. And improve the quality of samples and elements that you want to use. Anyway nice try though. And still keep on creating. have a good one Verdi